Hello everyone,can you please tell me what’s wrong with this night club flyer design.why it has been rejected. @n2n44 please tell me what’s need to improve.
Thanks advance
size 4x4 bleed 0.25
Cmyk & rgb
Body text 7pt
hi well for me the main thing is that it looks like thousands of other items in terms of styles and that , even individually, the flyer looks very much many of those using the same model, as colors and style and so on are super close. In the end, a real deja vu feeling is resulting from what u have here. Besides, as for me, I am still wandering how can a flyer having torn paper and plaster like elements can still make it … this is super overly used until this is really boring in the great majority of cases, if u ask me. I know that u may reply that many people do but for me the text organization is not a super efficient one, I mean for ,e and whoever knows how eyes are sweeping across any document indeed. As a matter of fact, u have two places to mention the club name but this is valued in none of these two cases and this makes very little sense when it comes to branding , according to me. The buyer will almost necessarily like the club to be well noticed, valued and so on. the “blabla presents” as a header is super over used too and does not really have interest , especially if u do not manage to really emphasize the name of the place / club … date is also important but Is very much treated like a sideway information so that u have a hierarchy issue a bit. What u have to keep in mind is that important things are who , where , when … these things must spring out
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Thank you .i got it 
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Its the same old song that has been a cover from a cover from a cover. The market place is saturated with this style.
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it looks like this is the "trendy style’ but this is cool if some space is a bit made for other things , too, so that the platform can make the most of the large community of authors and their different styles …