NightClub Flyer


#1

Rejected… again… WHY!!!
Night Club Flyer


#2

Probably the problem is the type is lacking character, it’s a bit plain looking for this kind of theme I guess. Graphically it’s quite simple as well, nightclub flyers should be a bit more dynamic. Probably overall the design will look much better if you get the text looking great and add some more colours as well.


#3

IMO, there is no balance between text and background. You should play with colours as well.
cheers


#4

Font is the problem? If so, what can i do more?
btw: i have more to work until i get this flyer aproved?


#5

I just gave you my suggestions on what I would do with the design.


#6

It was just my suggestion but what you do with it, it’s just your business :slight_smile:


#7

I mean what can i do more on Fonts ,you took me wrong :grinning:


#8

hi buddy, the other guys are right, this is not bad and some not any better items are accepted but for this matter , this is not exactly good enough all the same, u need to make sure that u make the thing more outstanding indeed , font wise as well as when it comes the background, this is a bit simple and empty actually


#9

Hi @Ainkiwi,

in my opinion it is not a bad start even tho it should be worked out more.

Your flyer is lacking in Typography and hierarchy which is the main problem.

Cheers,

Matt


#10

Thanks to all of you for your reponse :grinning: