Hi ,
nice composition!
To me, the orchestral samples used sounds unrealistic and fake. I would either use other samples or make it sound like a track from the eighties with synth strings and brass. Now its something in between.
Maybe also shorten the ending note a bit and make sure all instruments stop at the same time?
And also, what usage did you have in mind for this track? Now it sounds like a short music track or a bit too long ident/logo to me. If its meant for background music, maybe lenghten the track closer to 2 minutes or longer. If its meant as a logo I would have cut it in half halfway through and made to logos out of it. All this is just my opinion, of course!
Martin, maybe u are right but that maybe also due t the fact that normally we do not have to face the same reviewer after a soft reject which basically means that the concerned item may not be looking as attractive or interesting to some one else, ket’s not forget that there’s something a bit artistic in what we all do and offer here … and this which belongs to feelings too …