Again not OK. Suggestions please?

Different versions were included (no beat, only piano etc.) Drums not to loud (imo), String part not to dominant but of good quality. Still rejected with the general message. What must be altered?
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Hi AAS!

Beautiful piano intro. I think the rejection might be due to the style of the drums. I don’t think they fit very well in this context - maybe try some ambient / minimalist style drums? The rest of the track is beautiful. It’s definitely got potential.

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The drums do sound a bit out of place and loud compared to the other elements. Also, they’re quite abruptly cut off when they stop. I would turn this is to a simple piano piece backed by silky strings.

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Thanks for the comments.
It’s an easy fix to take the drums out or change them.
Nothing else?