will my design approve on themeforest?

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I think, no.

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A few things…

  1. There’s basic design issues throughout with alignment, a lack of hierarchy, typography needs significant work etc.

  2. To get Figma approved you need to a) be pixel perfect in design and b) warrant someone buying and coding the design vs just buying an already coded and functional template e.g. unique design, functionality, features etc. There is nothing here that cannot be easily found already coded in other templates.

  3. You have multiple other pages in the navigation that are not created here which feels unfinished

  4. Relume is mentioned throughout - if that UI kit is in use then you have licensing problems because it cannot be redistributed (even if edited) which makes it non compatible with commercial distribution. Plus you need to be designing original work, not basing items on other peoples’ UI/design

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Why? @eThemeStudio

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@charlie4282
For example
Which part is unique?

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See this
Just basic design

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@charlie4282 reply?

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I also think it won’t be approved. The reasons being the ones @charlie4282 already mentioned.

I don’t think it’s alright to add links with another author’s work as comparison.
But since you already brought it to the table, the fact that you don’t see differences between your design and the one you compare it with shows you still have to learn.

Don’t worry, we’ve all been there, keep learning and creating and you see your designs improving with time.

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@WindstripeThemes You tell me where is I got mistake in the details please?

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@WindstripeThemes if I pay you 50$ then you can make it for approvable?

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@WindstripeThemes @charlie4282

I know typography needs significant work and I can easily fix it but I can’t find where is the problem of alignment, a lack of hierarchy

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Comments like this emphasise a lack of experience and understanding of how things work

For what it’s worth that other example is very good - the design is cohesive and the attention to detail is impressive.

As @WindstripeThemes said surely this is quite apparent?

As (just one) example. Look at your blog detail page then look at theirs…

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In regards to alignment and hierarchy - again just one example of these and it occurs throughout the design…

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No hierarchy, inconsistent spacing, weight, etc.

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Not properly aligned

Again, I would be most concerned about the use of non-commerical UI kits…

  • If you cannot design your own original components then this is not the right place for you, and
  • without spending time going through the whole thing, there are immediately some modules which look like the UI kit which is referenced throughout the design and which you cannot legally use for submitting items to commercial marketplaces.
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If someone fixed my design then I can see where I made mistakes

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@charlie4282

See now. as I said I’m new and I want to learn

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No one can ‘guarantee approval’ - with all due respect this is a premium marketplace and it’s fair to assume a level of experience and technical ability to be able to sell here.

Is your design entirely original or are you adapting a UI kit which would explain why one is mentioned throughout?

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I used relume.io and I chose font and color myself. I’ll mention in document file and themeforest page. Is relume.io a problem?

@charlie4282

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Yes, you cannot use Relume for commercial stock.

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Again a premium and professional marketplace - design/code etc. all needs to be original and your own. Changing fonts and colours is not designing.

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My design is good like sprinkle. I’ll do something. I’ll remake it.

@charlie4282