It is rejected because the textures are arbitrary, light is wrong, no real materiality.
hi i am sorry to say just this because i guess u did your best , but the fact of the matter is that your item was rejected because these styles globally do not look good, this is this simple … Notonyl do u have a bit of an issue as far as originality goes - there are so many items in this category already that this is hard to bring some thing new - but in addition both the style and the preview “are not selling”. Actually to be perfectly accurate i rather like the black cyber style , but let’s face it, for the rest this is far from super convincing and having anything new to offer … most importantly again, something that u have to keep in mind for new times is that the goal of the concerned styles is not make the text that this is applied to is to make them get outstanding. You blatantly lack contrast at this stage , this is apart from being a bad idea, for a basic design principle , bringing some problems related to readability. I guess u will identify that this is not really useful to have texts if they hard to read or properly unreadable … i guess that this is making perfect sense without dissertating on the subject … To further comment about the subject , the preview ,if you take a closer look at what other guys are offering , u will undoubtedly identify that u are miles away from the things that most of guys are offering … a perfect example and successful author is @designercow , look at the way he sets up a “scenery” to value his works and u will have a better understanding of what i am referring to …