please help comment on my text style

hi indeed, this is not really surprising according to me thgat the style was rejected as the style is complex but actually looks sort of very too compact and the effect is not clear and that this is also parle due to the fact that the concerned styles are very dark so that they get sort of very contextual too as well, in other words, u are losing commercial attractiveness for many people … the fact that u right cheese and that the texture and style look like more like concrete is a bit disorienting and globally the presentation overall is far from making your item look outstanding, not only because of the lack of contrast but also to the monolithic kind of background that u have behind which is not helping to empathize the difference between one style to the other