Hi, i had a lot of rejections before, familiar with it. Yet I consider this as my best production to date, and don’t know whats wrong it. Without your feedback I can’t move forward. What is wrong with this? Mix, mastering? Reverberation? Thanks for listening.
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I like the feel of this track, I think it’s maybe just the lead instrument sounds you’ve chosen. The backdrop is nice though. The strings sound is also a little harsh, maybe a softer, warmer sound would work better.
Other than that I really don’t know!
Hi!
The bells and FM synth on start is conflict, and the melody need a variation.
So, increase aj-loop volume!
Good luck!!
The bells and synth are really loud and aggressive. They lack of dynamics and sound robotic (too quantized). The drums are too quiet in the background.