Another rejected :(

Hi everybody! First month on audiojungle, 10 rejects:(
What do you think about this reject? why?

Hi @Alex_peace! Well, first of all, the piano is too tight and midi-like. Try to pay more attention to the velocity and add more layers. The track is a little bit boring. Give it some progress. And the kick drum is weak, I think. Learn more about mixing. Good luck!

thank u ^^

Could possibly be a mastering issue. Wouldn’t be a bad idea to check out They’re pretty cheap and I hear their reliable.

For me, it took a little too long for the bells to come in. Maybe eliminate 4 bars of the beginning.

Also the piano did sound a little midi-ish. Something warmer with more varies velocities would sound great.