I agree with MidnightSnap, CartoonLab - you’re onto something, but adding some emotion to the way the piano is played would be good.
Also, adding some other pad sounds, swells, drop-type percussion sounds, or something that makes this track less of a “sound” (according to AJ) and more of a “logo-ident”. I submitted a handful of logo-idents but was told they worked better as sounds. I added some stuff to them, and they were then received as logo-idents.
Keep up the good work - it’s all about learning and not giving up. You got it!