Hi,
My 2 items are rejected. Can you give me a feedback why rejected.
First one is in music category, second one is in Logo&Ident
Thanks
Hi,
My 2 items are rejected. Can you give me a feedback why rejected.
First one is in music category, second one is in Logo&Ident
Thanks
Ok. I will try to point out the main issues.Keep in mind that i am not reviewer, and this is just an subjective opinion which you asked me in pm.
Hope this helps.Regards.
Hi there,
This sounds more like an anime track in the making, and would do well in that genre with some polishing. In addition to what has been written… The string part has a disco feel, corporate style is more syncopated. Also the chord progression could use some work, too many I-V’s at the beginning, though the second part of the progression has some nice stuff.
Best,
-Nathan
Thank you so much!
Try to have a better structure and arrangement, the corporate track beggins straight away with 6-7 sounds at once and much complex sounds too, it should be easy to follow the intro and then the other parts.
The logo sound ends too abrupt, the tail should be longer and more lush.
The kick only distracts the attention and not needed, the rhythm of the kick is weird.
The shaker is also weird. Try to do it more atmospheric a bit
Not far from sounding nice though, keep it up!