what is the issue in my landing page design

i did not mean this Charlie , indeed, i have noticed a real improvement already , but the thing is that i am a bit reluctant to push @pawanjangirjpr into really deeper work on this item as i am really not sure that even he fixes everything really well this will be having a real chance to get approved all the same (especially judging by other people’s comments and the fact that they might be better suited to get to know what could make it in TF) … i am not expert enough for web things - i am more a print designer than any other thing - to determine this accurately and work much more on this one, unless he really wants to improve to learn at the same time …

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