Feedback on Landing page template

Hello Everyone,
I will be thankful if you review my item and give me your feedback and tips
thanks all

My item Got hard rejected.
can you please help me with your feedback.
i don’t know if the design the reason or template structure or my code.

Ultra bad design.


With respect this is nowhere near the standards and you need to take some time to start again

  • basic design fundamentals like typography and spacing are all over the place

  • design is very old and outdated

  • lacks premium features or functionality and there’s nothing that couldn’t be found, again with respect, done better in freebies

  • code doesn’t validate

  • it’s chaos on a mobile

can you give me some examples for inspiration,
thanks for your feedback

thanks for your feedback