Feedback on Landing page template

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Hello Everyone,
I will be thankful if you review my item and give me your feedback and tips
https://ahmoselandingpage.netlify.com/
thanks all

2

My item Got hard rejected.
can you please help me with your feedback.
i don’t know if the design the reason or template structure or my code.
thanks

3

Ultra bad design.

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4

With respect this is nowhere near the standards and you need to take some time to start again

  • basic design fundamentals like typography and spacing are all over the place

  • design is very old and outdated

  • lacks premium features or functionality and there’s nothing that couldn’t be found, again with respect, done better in freebies

  • code doesn’t validate

  • it’s chaos on a mobile

5

can you give me some examples for inspiration,
thanks for your feedback

6

thanks for your feedback