Second template is hard rejected (really need you help)

I looked another users hard rejected template but don’t understand "WHY? "

The first page was for HTML landing page category

The second is for PSD template category

Thanks for any feedback.

Any feedback please.

Improve typography
try to change color
work on spacing

other then this your design have great potential

totally change your typography , your color is good and very very much more work on your details

hi for me the other guys are likely to be right, u need a bit more work on typo and design in my opinion