Track rejected.. once again



Hello guys! I am new on Audiojungle, 16 years old composer, though i have a lot of of trouble starting, I had 4 rejections out of 6 tracks… and I can’t find out why they get rejected :confused: I already asked Josepharaoh99 about the track, he said the drums were maybe a little too loud and tune not prominent enough, but he recommended me to post here.
So I just wanted to have a little more feedback, and know better why it was rejected, it would really help me !

here’s my track :

thanks ! :slight_smile:


Hi, the track is not displayed.


Hi, sorry it should be now


Ok now I see. With 0:55 should be the culmination of in my opinion, not the pit. Pit locality starting with 1:13 to be. No development. Sound great!


got that MikhailGraydMusic ! thank you


Agree that it needs to peak a little earlier and maybe a bit bigger, as it seems to drag along a bit before that.

Another thought would be to bring it up a few BPM as well to take away that draggin’ feel?

All in all it’s a well put together track, just minor tweaks needed imho.


The track sounds good to me. Maybe remixing the drums would help, especially on the kick. Hope that helps!


Alright so i’il change the structure as you said,and yea I’ll try bringing the BPM up a little, thank you. Hopefully it will be accepted !


The drums were initially voluntarily loud, but I think a little to much , and yes I’il try remixing them , thanks for your advice !