This FLYER can be accepted by GraphicRiver?!

#1

I dont know if i can be accepted by graphicriver with this item

#2

The typography looks a bit underworked, I think you should do more there. The hierarchy isn’t working very well, nothing’s really popping or jumping out at you. Doing more with colour, styling, scale etc should help.

#3

i’ve done some more improvements !

#4

Nice background, but now the typography is completely drowned out! Typography MUST pop out of the design and be the most visible part = otherwise it’s not communicating. Graphic design is about communication. You can barely read or notice the text here. I already said it’s the typography you need to work on the most, not the other parts. Still it’s a great background, if used right it could be good for a flyer. But you have to give the typography a space of it’s own, for example this one: https://graphicriver.net/item/spring-flyer/19448988

#5

you mean i need to work on the date/special guests text ? or on the summer text?