Hello! Your music seems to me too unfinished, the arrangement also leaves much to be desired.
It doesn’t sound like a fully developed and completed commercial track in my opinion!
Try to listen to tracks in the same genre!
Good luck
Hello! Your music seems to me too unfinished, the arrangement also leaves much to be desired.
It doesn’t sound like a fully developed and completed commercial track in my opinion!
Try to listen to tracks in the same genre!
Good luck