Rock track rejection. Please give me some ideas/ feedback.

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#1

Dear friends,
I know the review time is shorter, more files accepted, and of course more files rejected.
I love this track. but it also have a hard rejection. Please give me some advice and feedback for better track.
Thank you.
https://soundcloud.com/longxmusic/epic-sport-rock-preview


#2

sounds great, really punchy, but for me the synth sound overpowers the rest of the track when it comes in, maybe ending is a bit abrupt too?


#3

Definitely agree with this, when that synth comes in it is very overpowering- sounds great otherwise!


#4

Yes, i was thinking the same, i´m with the earphones and gave me a punch, and, maybe, bass too embarrasing¿?


#5

I have a version without synth too. It’s here. @AlisterBunclark @Manriquedelara @JonnyMakesJazz
Thank you for your words.
https://soundcloud.com/longxmusic/epic-sport-rock-preview-1


#6

Maybe i have to re-mixing, rearrange this track.


#7

Ufff, I´m on the streets still, i can´t hear it well , but it just an idea, less distortion or reverb in the guitars; 0:26¿?
I like the part without those guitars, sounds more clear and the sounds are easily to recognize.
Sorry for my english, i hope you could understand what i try to say.


#8

I agree with the others that the ending is too abrupt. However, I really like the synth part. It’s just too overpowering in the original version. To my ears, there is a problem with excessive high frequency caused by the cymbals and the synth. If you tame those down I think it starts to sound better. I really like the power and punch of this. It’s worth trying to improve in my opinion. Good luck!


#9

Thank you @MidnightSnap @Manriquedelara


#10

I have deleted the review file on Soundcloud. Thank you very much everyone.