Review my work please.


#1

I came here yesterday with a flyer design but since then i kinda upgraded the last one. I would like to hear your thought on the matter.


#2

I think it’s very simple design. Please try to make more complex and attractive design.


#3

Thank you for your response i will modify it accordingly and i will update with the design.


#4

this is way better than his former version indeed and u should thus try to push into pushign teh envelope a bit more again but stress his efforts


#5

I said i will update you with the revamped flyer so here it is.


#6

LOL what is new? this is the same style in black color, or almost …
using the names of celebs is not a good idea , too …


#7

Thank you for the response, I don’t want to sound disrespectful but I don’t really get what you mean by style. Also is it worse than the previous one( I really want to know if I am improving)? And one last thing, can you detail what i did wrong and what would you do if you were in my shoes? Only if you have the time of course don’t bother with me for nothing.


#8

n2n44 has been really helpful to you so no need to be rude.
my suggestion is to look at the dj flyers already on gr : https://graphicriver.net/dj+flyer-in-graphics


#9

listen buddy, have a look at the global organisation, this is the same more or less … u have a main central text and a very few additional texts … the background is basically made of poly and a color layer , so this is very simple to say the least … u may tell me this is a style, well maybe , but there are tons of this right now … especially as this style has been favored for a long while, so just ask yourself what u bring to the table in terms of originality …

i am also sorry but if u a talented designer , what u have here , well it takes 30 minutes to do it … so what do u think ? that resellers will be interested in this one? (whether this one version or the others , which are not that different anyways …)

now to answer your question, u did nothing really wrong … this is tasteful what u did … but too simple, do u get it?


#10

are u aware that in this one (blue one) u have some essential texts being the same color as the background? u think this is readable like this or that the information is popping out? have u ever heard about basic design principles? contrast is one of them, so basically u are violating one of the major rules , already …


#11

I am sorry if i came out as rude, i really did not want to, again i am really sorry i will contemplate about what you said and i will do my best


#12

My idea is, make the inner content more encapsulates, from the rest of the back ground in a way it merges through the entire design… I think specially with placements… boxing things… and consider visual balance at the moment it looks like a funnel… and your background had worked more, it’s soooo nice that the foreground can’t get the priority


#13

hein? lol your last sentence is having opposit ideas, is that normal?


#14

i understand your frustration buddy, on the other hand, think about it , i dedicate some time to help, it does not “bring me anything” if u know what i mean , so, at least, that would be great if u could respect my time and effort to try to help you and talk nicely …

do not get me wrong indeed, what u have at this stage is rather clean and tasteful, though, as regard to how difficult most of the categories have turned, this may not be enough yet … u may have to put a bit more into it … what i tried to explain is that there is nothign really unique into it and that any guy with good photoshop knwledge may choose to redo the same rather than buying … this basically means that putting more graphic effort into it, people will not feel the same and feel like “ok, i buy this , i save time and money”


#15

I was pointing out the priority… :slight_smile:


#16

ok but i still do not understand what u meant by that lol :slight_smile: