Hi guys, i´d really appreciate feedback on these songs. Maybe just for one if you don´t have the time?
https://soundcloud.com/breitbarth/peaceful-moment97bpm/s-mR1Eb
https://soundcloud.com/breitbarth/kindergarten-jam117bpm/s-7mqhJ
https://soundcloud.com/breitbarth/temple-visit98bpm/s-sNM2N
https://soundcloud.com/breitbarth/underwater-tale77bpm/s-wP1mJ
https://soundcloud.com/breitbarth/as-life-goes117bpm/s-9S8MG
Thanks in advance!
You don’t like bass? Why you have it quiet in the mix? this is very evident in the track." Peaceful Moment(97BPM)" make a spectral analysis of the music of other authors. you will see the difference.
Mixing - my biggest enemy… Thanks for this. Should be obvious but wasn´t for me. That´s why i asked, Thanks again.
Good stuff overall! Some may just not fit that well in the AJ library. Here’s some thoughts:
Peaceful Moment - there’s not dynamic variation on the electric piano (or whatever that is). That can make things sound a bit too mechanical. It’s especially evident in the grace notes. It’s also a bit 70’s-ish for my liking, but that’s subjective.
Underwater Tale - I really like where this one was headed! It seems like if you made it sound a bit more natural (took out some of the more synthy stuff) it would sell well.
As Life Goes - Strings sounds too MIDI-ish. A new library would help a ton. Also a better piano sample may help. Also, definitely too long.
Keep up the writing!
Thanks Jack, especially for the encouraging part 
I appreciate your feedback and i agree with all that you said.
I come from electronic music but i just enjoy (making) other stuff as well and i will keep on with that.
