I’ll give you some gut reactions for what it’s worth…!
String sounds don’t sound too authentic on their own at the intro, which might be better shortened 4 bars and get into the groove sooner, which I really like.
Overall mix sounds a bit on the bright side - evident in the ‘B’ section which doesn’t really shift in contrast much (in register mainly - still those high cutting strings but just different melody). If you chilled out the violins on the B section, the A section might sound better?
A lot of comments I get is on annoying elements that would obscure as background music - In this case, I think the strings are too high and cutting generally, like the strings are just violins, so no mid range or mid register - that’d be my main gripe.
Just my gut reaction - hope it’s of some use