Please! Review My Design Before Development

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Hello Talented peoples I need to review my design before development please give me feedback

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poor quality - sory
don’t upload

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Hello,

I just checked your template. I think the main problem with it is the typography,

  • Improve the line-height of paragraphs;
  • Remove letter-spacing of all texts. This makes the template ugly;
  • Pay attention to color combination. Don’t make it mozaic
  • The logo is truly bad :frowning:
  • Portfolio buttons color are badly chosen;
  • There are borders all over the place, all of them are too agresive; make them lighter, add some sort of opacity;

Now I’ve seen something tragic :frowning: Any portfolio item is not aligned. Have you designed it in Photoshop?

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My recommendation is to start a new template from scratch. If this will be a PSD then I tell you that 100% will be rejected.

You can check some approved templates and accommodate with the level of quality. Then start learning basic design skills from https://tutsplus.com/ then check your template to see what was wrong with it.

All the best

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Can you please check this one please https://ferkin.in/d_card

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Your updated design has a good start. The tabs are ok for this kind of templates (Resume/CV); But once again you have spacing issues and also, one main problem is the color combination. That yellow and the red does not mix very well.

Check this screenshot. I added a lot of things you need to improve

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There. Thanks so if i correct this issues so this should approve ?

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I think if you improve the color palette you can get a soft rejection. You can post here the link for a presubmission feedback after improving the item :slight_smile:

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Thanks, Please Review again https://ferkin.in/d_card/updated with new changes .

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https://ferkin.in/d_card/updated please review again

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You forgot the portfolio hover. Make social icons width the same. Bottom spacing is wrong.
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My extra suggestion. The template looks even good if you let a 40px top-bottom. Right now its top-bottom fixed.

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Please Review My Template approved ? Now its w3c Valid Code https://ferkin.in/d_card/updated also can i send pexels photos in src file

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Please Review My Template approved ? Now its w3c Valid Code https://ferkin.in/d_card/updated also can i send pexels photos in src file

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Good idea.

In my opinion you should make changes to color scheme.

And start fixing things like this:

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