Just submitted my first item, meanwhile I want the community here to review it.

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#1

Hello, I’ve just submitted my first personal portfolio template based on bootstrap. As I’ve read the waiting time is about a week, but meanwhile I want the experienced users here to review my template. Please give me your honest reviews so that if this gets rejected, I could improve the work in my next item.

Demo: http://edigitalmarketing.in/demos/imbiz

Thanks


#2

Typography is not good, you should improve it for sure


#3

Hi,

Some suggestions on each sections:

About Me:

The paragraph has 10px margin at left side, the name, paragraph and buttons should be parallelled. Also, give some space between image and the right side.


Services:

Typography should be improved in this section. Write something real instead of ‘Lorem ipsum’ and make them at least 3 lines.

Give some padding in each service and allow equal amount of space among icon, title and description.


Portfolio:

Portfolio items does not have any action! (Actually here you need to add image pop-over, image gallery or a link of single portfolio page) again its a portfolio template??? Big issue!!!

Do not say First Project, Second Project, give them a Real project Name.


Testimonials:

Give some space after title “What my clients say about me!”


Footer:

Change social name into icons , fb, twitter, google+ . etc.

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Thats all mate! Good luck with future creation!


#4

Thank you very much for the review. I’ll improve it.


#5

Thank you very much for the very helpful insight. I’ll make the changes.


#6

Hi, can you help me with fixing the template after soft rejection? The reviewer said there’s readability and spacing issue. More information here https://forums.envato.com/t/help-me-figure-out-readability-and-spacing-and-alignment-issue-with-my-template/92523e.

I hope you can help me here.
Thanks