Please help with my rejected Presentation Template


I was wondering if anyone can help me. We have had a number of presentation templates accepted by Graphic River and a couple rejected. I have taken on any feedback and created new options. I’ve previously had comments that the templates look too similar to other products on the market.

The most recent version to be rejected is the attached, which we thought was really different and exciting but also keeping the quality shared by our accepted template.

Can anyone give me some feedback on how to improve this template to help it fit the ‘quality standards’?


Any help would be greatly appreciated!