Please help. Rejected track

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#1

Hi, everyone! My track was rejected. And I don`t understand why.
I received a letter with:
Thank you very much for your submission. After much consideration it has been decided that this submission does not meet our commercial production (recording/mixing/mastering) standard, and our commercial composition/arrangement standard, unfortunately.
Thank you in advance.

#2

Dear friend,
In my view

  1. The bell fill at 0:27 and 1:27 is bad here. it has different timing and feel. you can remove it.
  2. You should add the hand clap sound over the chorus and ending to make it more “happy” ( or it sound not clearly on track?).
  3. A little staccato string can make the track more interesting.
    Hope it help.
#3

Thank for your comments!

#4

Very good track. Times getting tougher.