Hi to all:
please help me check my flyer before submit graphicriver, thanks.
demo:
Hi,
Your flyer doesn’t look bad at all. I like it.
But you need to work more on it to refine it.
The girl illustration it’s yours? It is included in download? I asked because looks in low resolution. If you just found the image on internet and you don’t include it in download it is hard for buyers to find something similar to replace.
You need to work a little bit more on typo hierarchy.
The main title needs to be treat somehow similar like illustration. Maybe add some outlines over it (like the lines on the girl’s shoulder) and the red should be the same red from the roses.
Delete that lens flares.
For the background use some watercolor textures.
i download the model of flyer in freepik.com but i will add link download in graphicriver and use placeholder.
i not understand it, please again explain
i not understand again…
EYE: I not speak very good english 100% please again explain thanks
Check the licence on Freepik. Some illustrations are free for commercial use and you can include it.
As for the Hierarchy:
Typographic hierarchy is a system for organizing type that establishes an order of importance within the data, allowing the reader to easily find what they are looking for and navigate the content. It helps guide the reader’s eye to read the flyer, whilst enabling the user to isolate certain information based on the consistent use of style throughout a text.
This is the hierarchy order in your flyer
This is a condensed font
i have account premium licence comercial and free use.
i not understand sorry, but i understand fix the date more small typography
Womens’s Day it is your title. As it is right now the word “Day” it is not visible from distance.
many thanks
Welcome
hi Jeri, do u have the right to use the drawing, is it yours? otherwise the hierarchy is not bad , except when it comes to the club name that is not valued, the footer is too simple in my view and nothing is popping out, it looks sort of a bit piled so to speak … The central one is not bad
The image has licence for commercial use
Many thanks I try make good flyer like as your flyer regards.
Give me your email address to send you psd file for this one.
I already submit you private msg
I just sent you the flyer