hi this is not bad in my view i rather like it indeed, though i tend to believe that it would be better if u changed the central typo and replaced it by another one, now, not sure what is supposed to be wrong anyway …
Thanks mate, I have not uploaded for review yet just thought I would get some constructive advice on the forum first. Thanks for your feedback.
i can understand that u try to do this, though, whether u submitted or not , got rejected or not, indeed no one can make sure of anything and u may get pieces of advice that would make u have the item approved … people try to help but is this really what they do in the end … hard to know as criterias to accept or not are pretty unsure …
I see here clear solution because I think it could be rejected (even hard)
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80’s - this is what is about - make your text more 80’s - shadow and pattern is not enough this times. (check text effects on graphicriver)
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This “9 pm till late” in the right upper corner doesn’t look good, Destroy this with some glitch effect or something. Make it old.
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Make noise effect overlay - if you know what I mean, in photoshop I would add 4 -6% noise effect on all design
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Make colors less bright.
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Bonus info - do not include woman picture if you don’t have rights to the picture because if you don’t the hard rejection train is on his rails
cheers !
Thanks for advice I will take a second look at it. The woman image is replaced with a blank placeholder layer on the final edit.
u are right texture effects are said to help people into liking designs, i guess because this is making the canvas look less empty and that this is bringing a bit dpeth to the table indeed
for teh color , i guess he created in rgb so maybe he should simply create in CMYK lol
indeed, i personally like it , i think this is cool
hard to tell , i personally do not see