New author needs feedback before I submit theme

Hi

I would like some general feedback on my WordPress theme that i have built. I am almost ready to submit this, but would like some feedback from anyone to see what I could improve/change maybe?

This is my site to market the theme…

https://www.ellmothemes.co.uk/

Thanks
Kev

Hi,

Sorry to say I highly doubt you can pass the first review stage with this. Colors are completely off. Too many design flaws out there, don’t know where to start. The typography needs work, there are many spacing and layout hierarchy issues. Mobile is a mess, see the screenshot. This screenshot = insta rejected.

In my honest and humble opinion, you are not ready to submit on Themeforest.

Hi

Thanks for the feedback, which is somewhat relevant & the issues will be addressed eventually, but this is not the template that I am selling. This is the marketing page to help sell the template!

Thanks
Kev

The marketing page has to be perfect as well. Even if your template is perfect (which is not the case), a landing page like this one is an instant reject. Regarding my comments, they were addressed to the template and not the landing page. Even if you fix your landing page, other issues stand for the template itself.

Best.

You’ve obviously put a lot of effort into this, so I am really sorry to say that this does not stand a chance right now. It looks very outdated. Typography and spacing is plain amateurish. I would highly advice you to find a solid designer who can completely redesign it from the scratch and hopefully you will be able to salvage some backend stuff at least.