Why Rejected.... Feedback Please....

Envato Authors Theme Authors
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Hi,

This is my first attempt to sell an item on ThemeForest, and the item was rejected. I will be trying again, but in order to improve and hopefully get some item approved in the near future, I need feedback and that’s why I’m asking you guys to help me with that.

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Thanks to anyone that can offer some feedback!

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1.you have some typography problems try to distinguish the headings from the paragraph make them bold or perhaps use contrast in colors;
2.the template is too short try add additional pages
3.try different overall color palette.
4. you have some responsive issues when resizing

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my advice is to search for typography,visual hierarchy, color theory, spacing and alignment.
Also another thing, your -sections- layout is very typical, try something new, look for creative layouts and see how they do it.
Good luck

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You really work hard. But unfortunately, I can not get any artistic elements & design in the template. Try again to make a new design template