@DesignSomething
for the flyer, i think that this is an issue and u rightfully mentioned about it , though there are some others, too
1- the typo is lacking combination
thus side information and more central information are not different , the impact on hierarchy simply brings the eye to get lost and for the information to be lost in the process. The eye of people in most populations is naturally sweeping across the flyer following a z-shape from top left to bottom right, important thus have to be placed according to this and the central fix point in the mid of the item … at this stage we end up on sideway information and it makes very little sense …
2- the disposition of the text in wooden boards is uneven
this either does not look aesthetic not realistic and most importantly again are hardly readable
3- lack of contrast between backgrounds and texts
this is violating one of design’s basic principles, texts are not popping out from the background and get hard to read, so unuseful in the end, so to speak …
4- the colors are not well chosen
the colors for a board are simply “unreal” and thus no one “can buy it” , options for a style making a darker wood texture coming above the board would have been a much better idea indeed
5- very much of a lack of space for personal information
let’s face it , there is a huge issue when it comes to information as people are having no space at all to put their personal information, put their logo, a website and all the other things that people may feel necessary
6- good composition but not practical and rather unbalanced
the thing is that there is a good base to work with the thing is globally very harmonious and well arranged but there is a lack of space in the back for information and the space left on top is comparatively too big, there is a bit the feeling of “an overcrowded” footer …
7- shadows need a bit more work
there is something that can be perfected as regard to shadows, some need to be dropped here and there for the composition to be more realistic , especially when it comes to wooden boards, when the cross each other and the small ones come over the central one