I personally quite like the main ‘house music party’ part but the other typography is the main issue - needs better hierarchy, alignment (look at the date top right), the #party and envato presents feels like an addon that do not belong where they are
Can i resubmit it after this correction like #part, Date and envato present you suggested…
It will probably need a bit more of a revision than minor updates
one more thing want to ask. envao team personally see the work or they have some Artificial intelligence kind of software.
It’s done by a human being not via ai or automation
than why they always send system generated rejection mail. as u have already seen my work.if some minor correction need to be done they can write personally. by the way THANKS Charlie for your suggestion.
There’s no way they could write/respond personally to every submission (likely to be several thousands a month)
If they deem an item to be close then they will give feedback (soft rejection) but if they feel it would be counter intuitive or too much to feedback on (hard rejection) then the ability to use auto replies saves significant time
hi to be honest there are interesting things in what u have , as @charlie4282 mentioned the central title , is pretty cool, the harmony of colors is interesting as well but there are also some things that are really major issues preventing u to make it with this item as such … First of all, u are violating a major design principle : contrast. This is a terrible idea indeed as this is bringing u in facing further big time troubles as not only is the text not super visible or outstanding but in addition, they are sometimes close to unreadable. This gets even worse when the concerned info turn out to be part of the what? who? when? where? which basically means major info that people want to communicate with … I guess u will understand that for a party, concert or whatever the date is something essential … if u cannot read when this is … game over! Same goes with the club name … with the address … in other words, u are just making sure that the place does not have any promotion! lol i guess that a club owner looking for a party flyer would not really appreciate it, if u know what i mean lol and same goes with a dj performing somewhere looking for having a crowd to listen to him mix … I also have a bit of a problem with the general style … though this is harmonious , te flyer is also easy to redo without having amazing skills, plus the central composition is quite massive , i don’t know how to say , well this looks a bit like a big block in the middle, this looks too compact , lacking breathing in a way , too. I also tend to believe that having such a header is not a good idea , just being placed above the head of the man … this making the text look like lacking breathing and thus impact but this also makes the composition look too busy or crammed … I am not sure u will agree or not but if u do not want to change any major thing to the disposition, then i think that your flyer would better being a portrait one rather than a square one …
no u have to bring “significant changes” and i assume that what Charlie referred to is not subsequent enough so that u can resubmit …
thank you for you valuable suggestion. i appreciate what u told. i will Redo.
Your typography is disconnected. Lower half looks ok but the yellow elements and the “Music” looks strange. Also you can find a better model. That guy looks like anything but party.
I think that you need use different fonts but my friend @n2n44 he is better design that I, maybe he will help you for approved graphicriver.
Good luck, regards.
hi the way u edited things is to “raw” this is cool that u have been thinking of working with complementary colors, thought the fact of the matter is that u have ti think about your item as a whole and that bringing transition to the table is something that u must do so that things too not get looking like disconnected from one to the other, Besides, i personally doubt that u have been working in cmyk colors as regard to the kind of almost fluo like yellow that u are displaying here … i do not manage to figure out wy u have been pushing the “music” word on the left so that both parts of the central title look like flagged on the left when all the rest is flagged in the middle , this looks as weird as not necessary indeed. I also do not get it … is that supposed to be a “new flyer” or the way edited the previous one? because this is not good idea to keep the same background , just changing colors from one item to the other so tis peak , by the way , with “this new version” colors are definitely less original that they turned out to be in the former version or former item … on the of the problems that u have otherwise is to connect date and time and that they do not look like sideway items pasted a bit where u could but that they instead make a whole harmonious and everything with the rest of what u have . There is something that is not as good in this one, too, the fact that the model does not really inegrate as well as the other one, this looks more artificial and the “erasing” that have been attempting in the shoulder area clearly does not look realistic or natural but is also far from being aesthetic , as well …
i think that the model is a problem as regard to the fact that this is not necessarily well cut and that that there are much adjustment layers to bring to the table so that this is matching
lol there is not so much difference with before … lol but the added pink touch is welcome …