Please help me to improve myself. This is 9 times my item has been hard rejected. Still not giving up…
Please help and review. Thanks
Hi Mate, there is in my opinion too much going on.
What I would do:
- A more simple Background at the top part.
- Reduce the opacity of your dark edges frame.
- Remove 1 or 2 elements of the centered design.
- Change the main typography. The embossed main Title is not nice, outdated. Make it flatter.
- The drop shadow of your main title’s base is quite amateur. You must do something about it.
- The logo part is too much. Take it away or change it. Also, writing “your logo” is outdated as well. Create a fake one or write something else like a haircut price for example.
- Use a bolder font for the small text.
That’s it for me. Hope I helped! Happy designing!
The black stroke in the text, the hair in the floor & the black shadow around the flyer ! in my opinion you must Think again about these
I would suggest going a little more simplistic. try a solid color background with some texture. Tighten up your elements a bit and clean up the test. the best thing you can do is look at files currently on the marketplace and compare.