Hi guys. My flyer template is rejected and I don’t know why. Please help with some advice. Thank you so much.
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There is nothing original. Typography, hierarchy, readability need improvements.
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hi as for me I think that u have improvement a bit as far as play out goes … this is not super logical if u ask me to have the logo going after the date , for instance … most of the things - I am dealing with text elements - are not contrasting enough and thus , in the end, not springing out enough though they are the essential information … u have decided for instance to value phone number by putting a bullet under but u give the text a very hardly readable colors that the thing that u had been aiming at falls apart and this element does not have the exposure that u were looking for.I also recommend that u drop shadows - at the very least - under central titles so that the are more visible and readable on top of such a complex background as a model… the logo is notably cornered but this is also in hues that prevent it from getting noticed, which makes very little sense when it comes to branding …
otherwise, for me a burning of the model is lacking so that the composition looks really realistic according to the direction of the lighting…
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