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I like it, but it’s the typography I think you should work on. The font choice doesn’t look right, my first thought is that you should choose a font that mirrors the curves of the thread - not something blocky and all straight lines like this one. With better typography to suit the style I think it would be approved.
Thanks ToivoMedia. I will try to work on that.
Anything else i can improve? Maybe the black version? Too much details?
The logo is approved. Thanks for your help ToivoMedia!
We also added some details and made a different version for the black and white.