Hi @TinsRecords,
very nice track, it sounds great, I like it! I don’t know, maybe I think the possible reason of rejection, it’s the distorted melody line in the interval 1:17-1:50, it’s too overdrive sound in my opinion… great work anyway! 
Thank you. Maybe I’ll fix it and upload it on a new
I think the guitar and kick around 0:58 and the snare around 1:06 are not ok.
Sound or the idea?
Sound, for me that kick and guitar would be better start with a fade in or something like that, it sounds a little bit abrupt and strange.
And the snare sounds like out of tempo.