Unfortunately not. It’s generally pretty flat and the colours burn my retinas. Plus the layout doesn’t really bring anything new or interesting.
Thank you sir, for your valuable comment.
yeah he should put a special mention and warning to let us know that we should put our googles on before having a look at his design LOL kidding , no offense intended, just a joke
hi buddy, wooohooo i am happy that i had put my glasses LOL kidding … but seriously think about shades and complementary colors , there is no way u can get anything accepted with such bad color combinations … even if your item were perfect u would ruin the preview with such combinations indeed …
pls see above
well some texts are not visible enough due to a lack of contrast between the text itself and the background under …
this is linked to lack of contrast and to colors choices as well as font variations or not , too, in any case this is too hard to read right now …
u have some issues like for “our services” that is not properly placed in the white space
this is still lacking originality , variations and font combinations indeed , not to mention that the italic used makes the concerned text look old and make no particular sense indeed
indeed, u did something really damageable to the main title , which should pop out much and be fully readable and right now we have “marketing” not being anything like this …
what should be the font size?
the font size for what pls? if u mean the general body of the text , this is normally according to your target … lettered adults are usually associated with 9 or 10 size fonts for this … and if the targets are older or much younger then u will increase proportionally to the age but in a general way it will rather be 12 … for titles this is up to u and depending on the kind of design …