I'm trying to improve, classical music

Maybe it’s not commercial, maybe it’s a song for a movie?
In any case, I can not understand why it was not accepted!
But I’m here to get your opinion, because I want to resend this song, correct!

Thank you so much for your attention and for the time you spent in listening to it.


Hey :raised_hand_with_fingers_splayed:t3:

Track is pretty good, but not good enough I think

I think that the arrangement is a little bit poor and not so interesting matching nowdays standarts.

Your music must meet the profession standarts and have commercial value for video projects.
I can recommend to learn on YouTube tutorials, courses more and keep going to write music.

The quality of tracks on AJ is improving day by day so you have to match this and permanently work hard and learn I believe.

I wish you reach the success man really

Cheers :call_me_hand:t3:

PrestoSound, you’re right, I did a more critical analysis of the song and realized that I made some mistakes and that it could be better built harmonically, I’ll try to fix it and put it here before sending it.

Arrangement and composition are great nothing poor but maybe too complex for audio jungle harmonically and changing direction too much. You’re definitely a great composer/arranger (this is really rich maybe too much for here unfortunately). So the problem is probably too complex for audio jungle or the quality of the mix (but I heard less good mixes (compress like a block and not so good spectrum balance) that recently pass so…). If I was a reviewer I would let you a soft reject and some advice concerning equing the mix only (you get a lot of 1000-3500 hz approximately and lack of definition above I think on a lot of instruments). You maybe should make chirurgical narrow cut here and there on your tracks to attenuate some very resonant hamonics peak on that area (1000-3500hz). Your mix would be less harsh and cleaner). You get a bit too much of very hi frequencies that make the mix sound noisy a bit. Your composition\arrangement is great and inspiring (could match very well on documentary or video game). Don’t fall in the 4 simple chords trend completely. I really think the mix is the problem. Try to improve the mix and try to upload it on another site because if you got a hard rejection you cannot upload it here for the reviewers again. I hope this help! :slight_smile:

Hi songideas!

You have some potential there, for sure. I think your name should guide you forward - you have to sell ideas :wink: For example the strings ostinato part, its so dawn the road, that no one would guess its there. Try making an ostinato strings track instead (build a track around one main idea, and develop it). Also the uplifting intro is nice, but then its an idea for another kind of track.

Best wishes!

p.s. Its definitely no classical music. Its orchestral, epic, cinematic etc.

Thank you very much for your position!!!
I am grateful to each of you to hear every second of this song. I will follow the advice of each one and in the near future I will present something new!