I'll be accepted by that?


#1

I rebuilt flyer, If you notice something that mistakes will not be accepted, please tell me.
Both are included in psd

Version 1
Test5.jpg

Version 2
Test6.jpg


#2

hi indeed this is probably because there is not real harmony in the way elements are organized in the composition and that there is too much of a bulk of items inside the composition … i also fail to understand what is the theme of the flyer and what a white skull has to do in a mainly golden composition …

your texts are very difficult to read and are really not popping out , not to mention that the choice of font is not much elaborated indeed , typos are simple …

finally the model that u are using is not outstanding and seems to be an element as any other when u are expected to have something that is high impact visually speaking and that is harmonious with all the rest too