I need a help why this logo has rejected ?

Hi everyone,
Please give me some feedback and advice about my logo. It has been rejected.

hi this is not a good idea to cut the illustration with the text … the typo is flat, lacking originality and font combinations. i also tend to believe that the logo is a bit too detailed indeed. there is a misspelling for tagline. finally the concept is a bit hard to follow actually … hard to understand what this is standing for