I Got Rejected Why

please i need explain for this why it’s rejected

I think there is lots that could be said about mix/production/commercial viability of this track. But really it’s not bad at all.

I think the main thing that needs fixed before addressing anything else is the clicking/clipping sound that happens within the first 10 seconds, first on around 5 seconds in, gets louder at 7 seconds. Maybe it’s meant as an effect but it just sounds like clipping or a hard synth cut off or something.

That would be enough to kill it right out of the gate.

thanks for your tip i’ll try to make it better as much as i can