how should I improve the quality of my design, because before I was rejected. I want to learn more. Please help me

hi in think that globally the typo is a bit flat and this impacts the hierarchy of information, besides, as the fact that your typo is globally way too big, which leads your item to lose refinement indeed. Otherwise,i recommend that u create a decent fake logo so that this one does not ruin your preview indeed

thank you for your advice, I’m very glad you can help me, one more is the layout wrong?
I will try to make it better.
Thank you friend

hi for me the organization looks ok, this is more a global size of elements related issue. Giving an extra touch of originality through the typo would be a good plus too

Thank’s :berdoa::berdoa::berdoa: