Rejected, So What was the reason and where to improve, Please Suggest to me!

hi well the thing is that u globally have a bit trouble, legitimately so, to handle the slanted shape that the organization is being based of. DO not get me wrong what u have here is fair but , let’s face it , u still have some white space issues being related to the concerned shape. IN addition, if the thing u are offering is clean, this is also a bit sort of dull and flat and rather arises “deja vu” feeling indeed. Introducing some touches of originality would really not hurt to say the least. The z-shape reading process is rather well respected which is cool but nonetheless, the logo is not being much valued and the “branding” does really need proper so to speak. U are also having a slight issue of contrast as well indeed … the fact of the matter is that not all the text are popping out and being as readable as they should be in a way …