With respect this is miles off.
as with so many others asking for feedback here, using stock backgrounds and elements that can’t be included is a big obstacle
typography is all over the place esp hierarchy and font choices
layout and content is not properly aligned, positioned randomly with no consistency in terms of margins etc
much of the content esp the main title is not cohesive with the rest of the design
You need to learn graphic design basic principles.
Agree with Design something.
It is in violence with All the basic rules.
- Color combinations
- Hierarchy etc.
This one looks very amateurish.
I think you all suggested good ones but this is the case:
There’s nothing any designer could do in 3-4 minutes on the item, if you don’t spend couple of hours on the design, no one would bother to buy it.