With respect this is miles off.
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as with so many others asking for feedback here, using stock backgrounds and elements that can’t be included is a big obstacle
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typography is all over the place esp hierarchy and font choices
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layout and content is not properly aligned, positioned randomly with no consistency in terms of margins etc
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much of the content esp the main title is not cohesive with the rest of the design
Other more experienced authors like @SomethingDesign @ki-themes @flyerlicious may be able to add more
You need to learn graphic design basic principles.
Agree with Design something.
It is in violence with All the basic rules.
- Alignment
- Color combinations
- Typo
- Hierarchy etc.
This one looks very amateurish.
I think you all suggested good ones but this is the case:
There’s nothing any designer could do in 3-4 minutes on the item, if you don’t spend couple of hours on the design, no one would bother to buy it.