Help me please!!!! always reject

Help me please!!! always reject
Help me, please figure out what the problem is, I sent more than 20 tracks and get a refusal, what will fix me, I’m in despair, maybe my account hates envato?

The work sounds damp, the main lead sticks out of the mix, it’s somehow “sharp”, it can make less attack, plus it falls out of rhythm, they don’t like this here. You can use a little reverb on the keys, and attack less, compress kick more and cut off its top a bit. In general, there is a feeling that the mix is not glued, everything sounds separately from each other. Yes, and in duration it is large, and you can finish 2:40. But the main thing is not to lose heart!