Great vibe, guitar and chords with 90's - early 2000's style drums and arrangement (reminded me a little of Geoge Benson of that era). Lovely melody. The problem here is purely balance (mixing). Basically, its the 90's drumkit that ruined your track (sounds like low bitrate mp3 kind of, with a lot of harsh high fequencies). I would suggest to remove that drumkit and replace it with somthing of a better quality and less distracting (snare is huge). Use that pink noise technique to balance and EQ your instruments if you are not sure where to start. Good luck!