I have seen your portfolio, since you come from banner and business cards section, web design is really different.
No proper spacing between sections, use the white space or the negative space correctly.
They say a website should create an atmosphere, from the screenshots above. I don’t really get the theme of the design. try to work more on the colors.
This looks odd, un-realistic. Before posting anything on such competitive marketplaces ask yourself “Would I buy the template?” and if the answer is no, you know you need to fix something.
It looks like an old 2005 based website design keep up the trends with 2015, like larger hero areas, abstract color schemes.
To be frank this PSD has a long way to go. Sorry if I am being too harsh, take proper inspiration from the top selling templates in that category and try again. LEAVE THIS ONE, This can’t sur-pass the quality standards of the review team.