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#1

Hi there,

worked real hard on a chrismas tune, hard rejected, do you guys have any feedback as to what is / could be ‘wrong’ with this one? Thanks a whole lot!

Just follow this link, you don’t have to log in to hear it,
just hit ignore below (blue letters)

Thanks.


#2

Hello, I’d love to help but the link doesn’t work for me. Can’t click it, anyone else has the same problem?


#3

Same here.


#4

Link doesn’t work.


#6

Ok what i ve heard so far:
-Tempo might be too low
-too much bass
-too much mid 500 hz

Hope anyone can some find time to reflect on my sweet christmas tune

Cheers


#7

link in top post should work fine now
Thanks!


#8

Sorry to say but some elements sounds like from a --> http://www.annonsera.se/images/00071/0/el-orgel.jpg

Some other parts are nice. :slight_smile:


#9

Thanks for listening!
I actually think the organ is a cool instrument tho. But for you it might be associated with cornyness or something. Then again… Christmas music is supposed to be a little corny aint it? I doubt the presence of organ-like sounds would be the reason for the rejection :thinking:


#10

I really like the track. In my humble opinion It seems like some of the background parts are a little too forward in the mix and they overtake the main theme. I also agree there is a bit too much bass.

Hope this helps!


#11

Cool, Thanks a lot, really appreciate it! Ok i will try to work that out

Cheers


#12

Hi! Help, please, to understand what is wrong with this track: https://soundcloud.com/mr_d-5/energetic-uplifting-corporate


#13

Nice tune, i like the general vibe you are going for. Real uplifting!

I would say the piano that comes in after a minute or so sounds a bit off timingwise, melody is cool
Also especially in the intro the drum sounds could be better, the intro could be somewhat more convincing, more organic

those are my 2 cents. Good luck, keep it up!


#14

Hi! maybe the time, too slow, try to add some clap!:slight_smile:


#15

Thanks! will look into that for sure :slight_smile: