Hard reject- need help


#1

Hello creaive friends!

Today l been hard rejected for this song. This is my first upload on audiojungle and I would be grateful if you tell me what mistakes l made in recording?

https://soundcloud.com/milos-popovic-778785348/happy-song


#2

I think your metal bell sound (glockenspiel?) is too loud and may be OVERcompressed. just play around with EQ or if it’s possible, try other bell timbre.

for example
https://soundcloud.com/eliasfrost/piano-bell/s-9zHLu