Hey,
Its not a bad start, very good idea. As mentioned above, too much reverb, makes sounds miss a lot of definition, punch and oomph. Thats the major problem i identify with the track personally.
Keep going and good luck 
Hey,
Its not a bad start, very good idea. As mentioned above, too much reverb, makes sounds miss a lot of definition, punch and oomph. Thats the major problem i identify with the track personally.
Keep going and good luck