First item got rejected, Feedback

Hello Guys,
my first item got rejected, can you give me some feedback? Is it a sound quality problem(bad mixing/mastering) or just a bad composition?
btw I added the Audiojungle watermark every ten seconds, so it must be something else.
Thanks in advance for your opinion :slight_smile:

https://soundcloud.com/valebln_official/hip-hop-organ

Hi @ValeBLN_Music!
Dissonance. Your chord progression is a big mess.
Doesn’t sound like music to me.

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